Arrival
We reach the cottage
Unpacking is delayed by
Squabbling over rooms
Liquid refreshment
The local water
Carries the faint tang of salt
It sticks to the teeth
Transformation
Within half an hour
The neat empty kitchen is
A familiar mess
Plumbing
Experimenting
With the shower tap settings:
It's Russian roulette
Not found
Drifting like ghosts from
Room to room, mobiles in hand,
We search for signals
Refuge
I wake up feeling
That there is something missing:
Oh - there is no noise
Downtime
The kitchen clock ticks
Unnoticed: nobody has
Any meetings planned
Burdened
The apple tree bends
Under the strain of lifting
The swollen ripe fruit
Late
The night's silence is
Broken by a distant train
Like an owl's sad hoot
Early
Through the open door
The crisp clean air floods in
Sharpening senses
Diaspora
Meeting old friends is
A reminder of time and
Distance we've travelled
Snug
The purple heather
Lies like a heavy blanket
On the sleeping hill
Buffet
Another pub lunch
Sitting outside in the sun:
Wasps are invited
Crisis
The village shop's closed
So the nearest source of milk
Is five miles away
Details
It's easy to miss
The map's faint contour lines when
Planning a journey
Plan B
Energy exhausted
They wait while I go ahead
To collect the car
Blase
The bullock stares back
Chewing lazily on the cud
He's not interested
Sunday
People crowd the shops
Seeking souvenirs, postcards,
Presents, toys and treats
Street theatre
The entertainer
Does his magic trick: making
The crowd disappear
Private sport
The bus driver aims
For the deep puddles, trying
To drench the pavement
Market forces
Museums charge high
Admission prices, but art
Galleries are free
Horrible history
The Middle Ages
Were a time of great piety,
Disease and squalor
Activity
Butterflies flutter
Around the buddleia bush
In morning sunshine
Work ethic
The half-done jigsaw
Exerts its demand: it has
To be completed
Routine
By the third day we
Have established a pattern
For the morning tasks
Forecast
The barometer's
Needle edges up, bringing
Hope of changed weather
Trouble
Talk of future plans
Bubbles into argument
Then understanding
Victim
An upturned beetle
On the bathroom floor vainly
Tries to right himself
Omen
The photograph showing
A Nazi rally displays
A common purpose
Finale
Many hands are found
To help with the last stages
Of the big jigsaw
Symptom
Extravagantly
Smooth, my close-shaved chin's a sign
Of time on my hands
Locomotion
The Age of Steam was
Before our time, but the trains
Were simply better
Thoughtless
A dad tells his child
To put his head out of the
Moving train's window
Pedestrianised
Puffing and panting
We inch up the long incline
Like the trains used to
Haggling
The ticket machine
Prefers a smart card but it
Will settle for cash
Late August
Each chill morning hints
At a change of season soon:
Summer is ending
Reorientation
After relaxing,
From two days before we leave
Thoughts turn towards home
Packing
We subtract our things
Room by room, removing all
Trace of residence
The map fallacy
Moving south always
Feels quicker because we go
Down the atlas page
Surfeit
The car is quiet
Children sleeping or staring
At the passing views
28/8/10
3 comments:
I like your choice of words to describe your observations. You are very good at both.
This is a great selection of haiku, though some seem to have missing beats (i.e 6/7 syllables)
I'm not keen on sentences that split across the lines, since it's meant to be succinct so splitting them seems like cheating somehow ;o)
You should join the weekly blogfest challenges at www.youknowthatblog.com or http://haiku-heights.blogspot.com/
you'd get more people commenting. :O)
Thanks Madeleine: I've noticed a few places where the syllables go out, but I find the process of boiling down a statement to near-haiku length valuable even if sometimes it doesn't quite get there!
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