or complete and utter poetry:
Poems by Martin Locock Copyright 2005-2011
I started to argue with this one, started to say you forgot kids - but fear took care of that argument!
I would say that these work overnight - kids are quicker!
I submitted it to Amaze, the cinquain journal, and it's been accepted. The editor felt "fear" in the last line was only one syllable, so I replaced it with "Erin", no, "children"!
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